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General Comment of Tina's speech, How to Lose Weight: First of all, the speaker related the topic to the audience by sharing her relative's experiences of losing weight. She did a lot of resaerch to support the theme and made the speech convincible. However, the topic was too general and much of what she said was known to many others. During the speech, she did not have much eye contact with the audience, gesture and facial expression. There was little enthusiasm in it. These are what I think of as to improving the entire speech.

General Comment of Agnis' Speech, Audiohead Alternative Rock: Preparation is essential before the speech and it seemed Agnis did not spend time preparing it. It was like a person standing in front of the audience and read the script with ok volume. The topic could not arouse the audience's interest, nor the speaker showed her enthusiasm of the band. It could have be better if the content of the speech had included information that was worthwhile and beneficial to the audience's interest.