The presentation was interesting at first because of the visual aid.The language is told in a clear and straight forward way. However, although she's talking about the pictures on the screen, she should maintain more eye contact with the audience. It's a successful speech in terms of the good connection between the speaker and the visual aid. To me, I didn't know the English term "product placement" so I think this speech gives me something that I didn't notice before.
Speaker: June & Penny Topic : Empty Sea
The opening caught the audiences' attention right away not only with verbal words but also with visual aids. The speech were thoroughly smooth. There weren't inadequate pauses due to forgetting the lines and the speakers didn't rush during the speech, which makes me feel easy and comfortable. But maybe a humorous tone could be added to this serious topic. All in all, we can see the speakers did a very thorough preparation.
Speech Evaluation
Speaker: Eva
Topic :Product placement
The presentation was interesting at first because of the visual aid.The language is told in a clear and straight forward way. However, although she's talking about the pictures on the screen, she should maintain more eye contact with the audience. It's a successful speech in terms of the good connection between the speaker and the visual aid. To me, I didn't know the English term "product placement" so I think this speech gives me something that I didn't notice before.
Speaker: June & Penny
Topic : Empty Sea
The opening caught the audiences' attention right away not only with verbal words but also with visual aids. The speech were thoroughly smooth. There weren't inadequate pauses due to forgetting the lines and the speakers didn't rush during the speech, which makes me feel easy and comfortable. But maybe a humorous tone could be added to this serious topic. All in all, we can see the speakers did a very thorough preparation.