I have to admit that I am really intrigued by what I see in your outline. I have no idea about what this is about, but it seems fascinating.
There are no references at the end of your outline. What resources are you using to support your speech with facts? Do you have anything beyond anecdotal evidence to support the concepts in your speech?
What is your perspective on this topic? Are you going to present this speech as an insider and a believer that is trying to let your audience know how wonderful your belief and activity is? Or are you going to present this as an unbiased outside observer that is explaining what the activity is, what the participants believe, and why they hold those beliefs? I would prefer the second approach.
Dear group member Tina and Mirande,
I have found some imformation about our topic and wrote the outline.
Sorry that I didn't find English version...(I'm dizzy now and we are in Taiwan, after all.)
Could you please read it and amend anything or add anything you want ?
And, I hope this script woudl be born eraly, so...
GET WORKING, MY FRIENDS.
(By the way, videos mentioned in the composition are here in my computer.)
I have to admit that I am really intrigued by what I see in your outline. I have no idea about what this is about, but it seems fascinating.
There are no references at the end of your outline. What resources are you using to support your speech with facts? Do you have anything beyond anecdotal evidence to support the concepts in your speech?
What is your perspective on this topic? Are you going to present this speech as an insider and a believer that is trying to let your audience know how wonderful your belief and activity is? Or are you going to present this as an unbiased outside observer that is explaining what the activity is, what the participants believe, and why they hold those beliefs? I would prefer the second approach.
Dear group member Tina and Mirande,
I have found some imformation about our topic and wrote the outline.
Sorry that I didn't find English version...(I'm dizzy now and we are in Taiwan, after all.)
Could you please read it and amend anything or add anything you want ?
And, I hope this script woudl be born eraly, so...
GET WORKING, MY FRIENDS.
(By the way, videos mentioned in the composition are here in my computer.)