Sophia's evaluation: You take a challenging topic, maybe yours was the hardest one. To inform a topic which is unfamiliar to both audience and speakers has some risks. Some risks you avoided and did it pretty well, while some you don’t. First, right at beginning, you gave us a clear definition of PBD and used adjectives to vivify the symptoms of this disorder, which is a merit. Another advantage is your PPT. Showing the psychological jargons in written form really helped audience know “what the word is” and “how is it spelled”. However, you failed to explain “what did it mean?” it truly confused audience when you provided many slides without supporting ideas. I think you can cut down the amount of professional term and then give much more details on special features of the typical psychological disease. For Mallory’s personal comment, I think you spoke fluently and confidently. Yet, you can improve your intonation. The “monotone” really made me dull sometimes. Over all, I appreciate your courage to pick up such a challenging topic and thank for giving me the useful information.
Sophia's evaluation:
You take a challenging topic, maybe yours was the hardest one. To inform a topic which is unfamiliar to both audience and speakers has some risks. Some risks you avoided and did it pretty well, while some you don’t. First, right at beginning, you gave us a clear definition of PBD and used adjectives to vivify the symptoms of this disorder, which is a merit. Another advantage is your PPT. Showing the psychological jargons in written form really helped audience know “what the word is” and “how is it spelled”. However, you failed to explain “what did it mean?” it truly confused audience when you provided many slides without supporting ideas. I think you can cut down the amount of professional term and then give much more details on special features of the typical psychological disease.
For Mallory’s personal comment, I think you spoke fluently and confidently. Yet, you can improve your intonation. The “monotone” really made me dull sometimes.
Over all, I appreciate your courage to pick up such a challenging topic and thank for giving me the useful information.